Friday, May 06, 2016

Just the Rain


There is white noise in the background...
it is cold outside...
smoke comes out from my breath...
and I am wet...

I feel the trickle of water on my skin...
my clothes are really heavy...
they are soaked from the sky's tears...
for she has had a loss...
a loss that is truly great...

She has lost the sun...
this will be her last tears...
for the sun will make her cry no more...
because the sun brings tears to the sky...

The sun burst out his love for the sky...
and with that he ceased to exist...
the moon took his place...
and took the opportunity...
to love the sky in lieu of the sun...

But little did I know...
the sky wasn't crying...
It was actually just raining...

PS. It's really coincidentally raining right now.

14 comments:

  1. It's nice to sometimes regard emotions as the weather. Like rain, tears can be stormy or just a light sprinkle, and feel angry, cold, dreary and sad, or even come through the sunshine.

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  2. Symbolical poem indeed reflect what we feel sometimes. Great poem here.

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  3. We really welcome the rain these very hot days of summer, don't we? I consider them tears of joy and comfort.

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  4. I love the way you symbolize the rain with tears. Sometimes it does seems like the sky is crying because of love lost. :)

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  5. I thought the title of the post was odd but it is nice how the title doesn't matter because the poem bought out your emotions so well. Rain is a great symbol of tears of both pain and joy!

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  6. But the loss isn't permanent.
    He'll just lost his temperament
    He'll come back the next day,
    making her smile and be gay!
    (ok, that's bad... But still I tried, lolz!)..

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  7. nice poem. Summer is about to come and raining season slowly unfolding. I cna't wait to sleep with such a comforting weather. :)

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  8. What a nice interpretation of losing someone so special in your life. This poem is very emotional and I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it. Thanks for the good read, what a way to end the weekend.

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  9. Everyone has their own problems... and rain usually coincides with our blue emotions, just that you can take it as the rain cleansing away all your sadness!

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  10. It's really written. It's a nice coincidence that the weather went with your mood.

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  11. Very well-written! Rain compared to Sky's tears is awesome. By the way, the tears can be of happiness too.

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  12. Love the way you have expressed your emotions into the words. It is so beautiful to read over and over again.

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  13. Rain really can evoke emotions. Especially true if you get caught in it without an umbrella. :)

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  14. This is a really good piece. very well written. Oh and I like your playlist.

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