Wednesday, June 08, 2016

Just When You Hold My Hand


Maris and Lonard's hands when I was the third wheel

I feel your warmth
when you hold my hand

Apricity at its finest
rekindling the sparks inside me

The way your rough edges touch my skin
remind me that this is real

and with that I knew
that everything will be okay

21 comments:

  1. Ooooh this is pretty sweet. Thumbs up mate!

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    1. Omg! Thank you! I wish you didn't comment as Anonymous though. I want to know who you are so we could be friends :)

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  2. Haha that's a nice song playing in the background on the site.

    What do you mean you're also a banana?

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    1. It doesn't really mean anything. Haha. I just want to state how weird I am. XD

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  3. the roughness of life is real. I like how you mentioned that to put things in perspective...

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  4. Nice poem! I admire people who can write something as good as this. Seems you're inspired! :)

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  5. Nice poem but it says on the photo caption- third wheel?

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    1. Yes.. third wheel. Maris and liard are dating and i was kinda out of place. So yeah... third wheel

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  6. Oh, a new word Apricity! Will have to look that up. I like it when poet chooses to use a rare word. "Rough edges of skin" -- very nicely put.

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  7. This is really a great breather to read especially when you're in depression or really stressed. Holding the hand of someone you trust feels good.

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  8. Short poem but give the life of each word that expresses the overall meaning. I like the way it's sonstructed and the warmth it captured the readers. Great!

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  9. A person's touch is always powerful, especially when it's done in kindness, love or compassion. Nice poem.

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  10. That's the power of touch... Its very real and special...

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  11. I think we just need that comforting presence to make things a lot easier. By the way, I love the music at your site.

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  12. I feel you here, that sometime we also need to be cuddled and give some sweet thoughts or anything that we could feel that we are loved.

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  13. That's a great way to describe how it feels to be touched by someone you care about. It's definitely electrifying!

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  14. How sweet to have that kind of confidence in another human being. The writing is very good.

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  15. True...When someone yours holds your hand or hugs you, all becomes well.

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  16. This was a sweet poem. Everyone needs that feeling of touch.

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  17. Strong words sweet lady, love that! Thankyou for sharing.

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  18. everything will be ok. It's the only thing a girl need to know and hear from the guy we love and trust.

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